Question

假设你是来自农村的学生，小时候患眼病，因无钱医治而影响上学。ORBIS医生手术后视力恢复，能正常开展学习活动，心情开朗并喜欢和朋友交流。

请写一篇英语短文，叙述你以前和现在的生活情况及内心感受。

要求：1.不少于80词，头部分已给出，不计入总词数；

2.所给信息并可适当发挥；

3.不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

A helping hand from ORBIS

I am a student from a village,

 

 

 

Answer 1

I’m a student from a village. When I was young, I could not see the world. My parents were poor and did not have enough money to send me to hospital. So I could not go to school, I was very shy. One day ,the ORBIS doctors came, they performed an operation on me at once. The operation was successful. I am able to see everything clearly and can go to school now. I like chatting with friends. I am very grateful to them. I think ORBIS is a wonderful organization. We should support their work by sending donations to ORBIS.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。