Question

书面表达。（共10分）

请以My Pen Pal为题写一篇50词左右的短文。可以从下面几个方面来写：

1. What’s his/her name?

2. Where is he/she from?

3. How old is he/she?

4. What does he/she look like?

5. Does he/she like English?

My Pen Pal

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Answer 1

Kate is my pen pal. She comes from America. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She has a round face and short curly hair. She is good at all the subjects at school. She likes English very much and she can speak English well. We often chat in English so that we can improve our English. She is so lovely and friendly that I love her very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以My Pen Pal为题写一篇短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括：一、What’s his/her name?二、Where is he/she from?三、How old is he/she?四、What does he/she look like?五、Does he/she like English? 写作提纲虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据写作提纲,给我们介绍了朋友Kate。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如She is so lovely and friendly that I love her very much.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses.等。

考点：提纲类作文。