Question

请以“Proud of My School”为主题写一份升旗仪式发言稿。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Proud of My School

Hello! I am happy to stand here to have a speech. The topic of my speech is “Proud of My School”. I hope you will like it.

My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 2,000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis. Sometimes we have class meetings. They are very interesting.

I love my school because it's like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以Proud of My School为题写一篇作文。我们可以自己列一写作提纲，主要包括三部分的内容。一是演讲的开场白。二是为学校感到骄傲的原因。最后是呼应开头，为学校感到骄傲。。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者将短文分成三段，阐明自己为学校感到骄傲，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如My school is very big with several tall buildings.I love my school because it's like a big family. We have lots of fun at school.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.等。

考点：话题类作文。