Question

19．为了给Free the Children筹款，新洲市将于本周日举办美食节，你打算参加这个活动．现在你正在为本次活动做准备，请阐述你在活动中要做的三件事，并说明理由．
要求：1．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
 2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．

What to do	Why
wear the school uniform	show good discipline…
cook fried rice and make dumplings	easy to cook，popular…
…	…

The city of Xinzhou will hold a food festival to raise money for Free the Children this Sunday．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I plan to wear our school uniforms，because they can show good disciplines．我打算穿校服，因为他们能表现出良好的纪律性．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
  高分句型二
    I hope I can raise more money for the children． 我希望我能为孩子们筹集更多的钱．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 The city of Xinzhou will hold a food festival to raise money for Free the Children this Sunday． It's really my honor to have the chance to take part in the activity．And being able to do things for the children is meaningful．I plan to do three things on that day．【开头点明主题】
     First，I plan to wear our school uniforms，because they can show good disciplines【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．Second，I'm going to cook fried rice and make dumplings．They are popular and easy to cook．Last but not least，I will take my good friend Yang Fan there．He is kind and active．I need a good helper to sell my food．【正文部分详细介绍】
     I hope I can raise more money for the children【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．