Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，满分10分）

你的同学Tom 由一个内向的变成了一个很开心，令人喜欢的人，你想知道原因，他告诉了你一下几点。（80字左右）

内容提示：

1. 有空时候做一些义务性的工作，帮助的确需要帮助的人，这样可以交更多的朋友;

2. 每天都对自己笑一笑, 让自己感到很自信，别人也开心。

3. 有困难时候，多跟朋友交流，也要一起分享开心与不开心

4. 他的感受。（自己发挥）

Now I am very happy and outgoing．I would like to tell you how to be a kind person．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Now I am very happy and outgoing. I would like to tell you how to be a kind person. I often do some voluntary work when I am free at first. I am glad to help people in need. It makes me very happy. At the same time, I smile to myself and my friends. When I smile, I feel I am very confident. In fact, When you have difficulty, you can communicate with your friends or others, and you can find it very necessary and helpful. Besides, you can share your joy and sadness with them. It’s very useful for me to be a happy and friendly boy. I believe you also can be..

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，可按照时间顺序来写，注意要点的齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有许多实用的表达方式When I smile, I feel I am very confident. In fact, When you have difficulty, you can communicate with your friends or others, and you can find it very necessary and helpful. Besides, you can share your joy and sadness with them.等等。