Question

5．假设你是Wei Ming．你曾经向Alice倾诉过你的烦恼，她也给你提出了解决问题的办法和建议．现在，Alice给你来信询问你的近况．请根据下面的表格内容及Alice的问题，给她写封回信．

Wei Ming's problems	Alice's advice
My parents give me a lot of pressure about school．	You should talk to your parents．Ask them why they give you so much pressure．
I don't have enough free time．	Life shouldn't just be about grades．Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are important，too．
I have to compete with my classmates at school．	You shouldn't compete with your classmates to get better grades．You should all be helping each other to improve．

Alice's questions：
1．Have you talked with your parents？
2．What do you do in your free time？Have you been to anywhere interesting？
3．How are you getting on with your classmates now？
要求：1．回信须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥．
2．不少于60词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Alice，
Thank you very much for your help．                                             
Yours，
Wei Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
I told them that I had too much pressure and life shouldn't just be about grades．我告诉他们我的压力很大，生活不仅仅是成绩．that引导的是宾语从句，too much是固定短语，意思是"太多的"修饰不可数名词．
高分句型二：
Last week I went to the Yellowstone National Park where I saw many interesting things，especially wild animals．上周，我去了黄石国家公园，在那里我看到了很多有趣的事情，特别是一些野生动物．where引导的定语从句，修饰先行词Yellowstone National Park．

解答 Dear Alice，
Thank you very much for your help．I have talked with my parents according to your advice．I told them that I had too much pressure and life shouldn't just be about grades．【高分句型一】（告诉家长压力很大）Every student should have a more colorful life．And the result is good．They begin to understand me better and give me more time to do things I like，such as doing sports and games，listening to music，hanging out with friends．Last week I went to the Yellowstone National Park where I saw many interesting things，especially wild animals．【高分句型二】（外出旅行也是一种很好的放松方式）It was fun．Now I begin to get along with my classmates and when someone of us is in trouble，others will help him or her．We are helping each other and improve together．
Yours，
Wei Ming

点评 首先要仔细阅读表格中提供的英文信息，在深入理解的基础上，根据提示把自己的想法写出来，注意要紧扣题目的要求．表述的时候可以使用宾语从句，定语从句等较高级的语法结构．