Question

6．假如你叫李平，最近你的英国朋友Ben在邮件中附上一幅图向你呈现了他面临的压力并希望你能在邮件中就此和他交流．
注意：1）请在回信中挑选图中1-2条描述并分享你的个人经历及给予建议．
2）词数在80字左右，开头和结尾已给出．（不计词数）
参考词汇：over scheduling 过量的课程安排   expectations期待

Hi!Ben，
How are you？Hope you are well．I have these stresses，too．
I often fail to perform well in an exam，once I even doubted if I lacked ability．I couldn't bear teachers'caring，parents'complaints or my classmates'good grades．Even the ticking clock on the wall might be the reason that made me angry．　 Now，I realize that removing pressure from life is an impossible dream．I keep telling myself that life is what you think．There are some ways which can help reduce my pressure．Watching funny movies with my friends，reading exciting novels and talk with parents are really helpful．How about your ways．
I'm really looking forward to receiving your reply soon．
YoursLi Ping．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是请在回信中从图中挑选1-2条描述并分享你的个人经历及给予建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；面临的压力有：父母，大学，期待，关系，学校，过多的课程安排，适应…选择一两个来描述
2．你的个人经历及给予建议
 
常用到的重点短语：
fail to do sth 做某事失败
talk with sb 与某人交流
make sb+adj 让某人怎样
【高分句型】
1．Even the ticking clock on the wall might be the reason that made me angry．
that made me angry是that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的主语，修饰先行词reason．
2．I ①keep telling myself ②that life is③what you think．
①keep doing sth 一直做某事
②that引导的宾语从句，作为tell的宾语．
③what引导的从句和is构成系表结构．
3．There are some ways which can help reduce my pressure．
 which can help reduce my pressure是which作为关系词的定语从句，which作为从句主语，修饰先行词ways．

解答 Hi!Ben，
How are you？Hope you are well．I have these stresses，too．
I often fail to perform well in an exam，once I even doubted if I lacked ability．I couldn't bear teachers'caring，parents'complaints or my classmates'good grades．Even the ticking clock on the wall might be the reason that made me angry．【高分句型】（来自老师和父母的压力和个人经历）　  Now，I realize that removing pressure from life is an impossible dream．I keep telling myself that life is what you think．【高分句型】There are some ways which can help reduce my pressure．【高分句型】Watching funny movies with my friends，reading exciting novels and talk with parents are really helpful．How about your ways？（建议）
I'm really looking forward to receiving your reply soon．
                                                             Yours
                                                            Li Ping

点评 这是一篇看图作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是仔细观察图画，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．