Question

8．在中考来临之际，许多学生感到压力很大．为了缓解紧张情绪，发挥最佳水平，请你从学习和生活两方面为同学们提出几条合理建议．
要求：（1）语言正确．
（2）书写工整、规范．
（3）词数：40左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
The senior high school entrance exams are coming．Many students are stressed out In order to do well in the exams，I think you shouldstudy hard in class firstly．Then after class，you can review your lessons．At noon you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk when you go to bed
Relaxing in a right way is as important as learning．You can do some sports，such as playing football，basketball and so on．
Best wishes to you．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是从学习和生活两方面为同学们提出几条合理建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．学习上的建议
2．生活上的建议
3．祝愿．
常用到的重点短语：
had better do sth 最好做某事
have a rest休息一下
as…as  和…一样…
such as 例如
and so on 等等
高分句型：
At noon ①you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk ②when you go to bed．
①had better do sth 最好做某事，提出建议的一种句型，比较委婉．
②when引导的时间状语从句．

①Relaxing in a right way is ②as important as learning．
①动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数
②as…as  和…一样…中间用形容词或副词的原级，本句是加上形容词important，表示一样重要．
He runs as fast as Tom．他和汤姆跑的一样快（fast是副词）

解答 The senior high school entrance exams are coming．Many students are stressed out．In order to do well in the exams，I think you should study hard in class firstly．Then after class，you can review your lessons．（学习上的建议）
At noon you'd better have a short rest and in the evening you should drink some milk when you go to bed．（高分句型）Relaxing in a right way is as important as learning．（高分句型）You can do some sports，such as playing football，basketball and so on．（生活上的建议）
Best wishes to you．（祝愿）

点评 此为材料作文，要仔细审题，抓住重点，在阐述自我保护的方法时要把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，可使用一些表示顺序的词，使论述更明确，更有层次感．还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型，尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调．要求语句通顺，语法，词汇，时态正确，书写规范