Question

16．假如你是刘芳，你昨天去游览人民公园，不小心患了感冒，今天早上觉得头疼，你爸爸给你量了体温后，发现你发烧，便带你去看医生，医生说你需要卧床休息3天．请你给何老师写张请假条．开头结尾已给出．
参考词汇：headache头痛； take the temperature量体温；  fever发高烧； ask for three days'off．请三天的假．
Dear Mr．He，
                                                                    
Yours respectfully
Liu Fang．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I've caught a cold because I  went to the People Park yesterday我昨天去游览人民公园，患了感冒．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Immediately he took me to see a doctor，who advised me to stay in bed for 3 days我爸爸立刻带我去看医生，医生建议我需要卧床休息3天．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的doctor．

解答 Dear Mr．He，
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today．I've caught a cold because I  went to the People Park yesterday．【高分句型一】
This morning I had a headache．After taking my temperature，my father found that I had a high fever．（发烧）Immediately he took me to see a doctor，who advised me to stay in bed for 3 days【高分句型二】．（看医生）Now I am writing to you to  ask for three days'off．（请假）
Yours respectfully
Liu Fang．

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