Question

假设你是导游James，现在有几名外国游客要去北京参观旅游。请你根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下北京的概况。文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：

北京位于中国北部，是中国的首都城市，也是中国的政治中心；

美丽而且现代化，但是有太多的汽车，空气污染严重；

拥有悠久的历史，是一座古老的城市；有许多名胜可参观，如……；故宫曾是皇帝的家；秋天是北京最美的季节；

可以在“Travel in Beijing”这本书中了解更多情况。

词汇：政治中心 the political centre 皇帝 emperor

Hello, everyone! I am your tour guide James. In the following four days, I will show you around Beijing. First let me tell you something about Beijing.

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Now, I will give each of you the tour book.

Hope you will have a nice time here!

 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I am your tour guide James. In the following four days, I will show you around Beijing. First let me tell you something about this city.

Beijing, our capital city, is in the northern part of China. It's also the political centre in China.

It is beautiful and modern, but there are too many cars and the air pollution is quite serious now. Beijing has a long history and it is an old city. There are lots of places of interest to visit here, such as the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square, the Summer Palace and so on. And the Palace Museum was once the emperors' home. Autumn is the most beautiful season, and the weather is fine and the natural views are so beautiful during summer. If you want to learn more about this city, you can read the book "Travel in Beijing".Now, I will give each of you the tour book.

Hope you will have a nice time here!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者带几名外国游客要去北京参观旅游，向他们介绍北京的一些情况，全文以一般现时态为主，也用到了一般过去时，一般将来时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 In the following,show around,tell you something about this city,in the northern part of China,has a long history , lots of,places of interest,such as,and so on, he natural views,during summerlearn more about 等短语，条件状语从句. If you want to learn more about this city；用到了形容词最高级 the most beautiful，不定式做定语 to visit。文章层次清晰。文章整体内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。