Question

书面表达
Jill是一名初三的学生。她很喜欢玩电脑，但她现在每天有很多的功课，没时间去做自己的兴趣爱好。她感到很苦恼。她写了封信给Sigmund,希望能得到一些建议。
不少于60个字，开头结尾已给出，不计数。
Dear Sigmund,
I am a Grade 9 student.                                                       
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jill

Answer 1

Dear Sigmund,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem but I don't know how to solve it.
    I have a lot of hobbies. Playing computers is my favourite. But now I find I do not have enough time to do my hobbies because of too much homework every day. I feel stressed though I know doing homework is very important. I feel really bad about it.
Should I focus on my homework and give up my hobbies? Can you tell me how to keep a balance between the two? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jill

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信介绍自己的烦恼，征求建议。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。