Question

近几年来，中国的中学生出现了“出国留学热”。成千上万的中学生已经去国外学习，而另外一些学生也一直在设法出国，对此人们有不同的看法，请根据下面的表格内容，以Studying Abroad”为题写一篇短文。

优? 点	缺? 点
1．与不同文化背景的人交朋友。 2．更快地学习外语。	1．年纪小，缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。 2．生活和学习费用高。

作文要求：

不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总次数。

Studying Abroad

? In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Studying Abroad

? In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students, but I don’t think it’s the only way to achieve success. Every coin has two sides. First of all, studying abroad can make us improve our foreign language quickly. Secondly, we can make friends with the people who are from different countries. Thirdly, we will learn a lot about the culture of other countries.

? On the other hand, it will bring a lot of problems to study abroad. For example, some students are too young to look after themselves well. And the cost of studying abroad is very high. It will bring a heavy burden to the family. So when you want to study abroad, you must think it again and again.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们就时下比较热门的话题，即出国热发表一下看法。表格中为我们列好了出国学习的优点和缺点。我们需要用正确、精炼的语言将其表达出来。故这篇作文我们可以分两个层次写。开头已经写好，点名了主题。接下来我们可以从优点和缺点两个方面来论述。这样整个文章的结构大体出来了。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时、第三人称来写。写作时还要注意语句的连贯及表达的流畅。

【亮点说明】这篇范围是比较优秀的。首先它的层次很分明，共有两段，按照对待出国热这个事情的优点和缺点进行划分。其次这篇短文意思完整，要点全面。文章中包括了题目中的所有要点，意思完整。另外，这个短文表达流畅，有节奏。文章中注意使用不同的句型，如but I don’t think it’s the only way to achieve success、Every coin has two sides、we can make friends with the people who are from different countries、On the other hand, it will bring a lot of problems to study abroad、some students are too young to look after themselves well等。

考点：提纲类作文。