元旦即将来临,请为你们的英语老师制作一张元旦贺卡,祝她新年快乐,感谢她对你们的帮助,并希望在你们班上能度过快乐的一年.
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学生:习作: To English Teacher (X1) Happy New Year's Day! Thank you for teaching us so well. Thanks(X2) for your hard work, and for your help. We hope you enjoy to teach(X3) us. We hope you have a very happy year in our class. Good luck! Best wishes to(X4) New Year's Day. From your student. 剖析: 1.在English Teacher前最好加Our Dear.2.在thanks处如加上Many一词更能体现对老师的感激之情. 3.enjoy后跟doing,所以to teach要改为teaching. 4.“祝愿”“Best wishes for a date或to sb”是固定搭配,文中New Year's Day是节日,所以要用for. 总评:本英文贺卡格式正确,表达清楚,贺词恰当,表达了对老师的感激之情和美好祝愿. |
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