Question

【题目】书面表达

以“My good friend-Amy”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。

要点提示:1. Amy 12岁，留着又长又黑的头发，来自北京，现在和父母一起住在宜兴;

2. Amy又高又苗条，看上去讨人喜欢，不戴眼镜;

3. Amy擅长画画，喜爱舞蹈;

4. Amy喜欢所有功课;

5. Amy在学校有许多好朋友，他们都对她很好。

My good friend-Amy

Answer 1

【答案】My good friend-Amy

Amy is 12 years old. She has long and black hair. She is/comes from Beijing. She lives in Yixing with her parents. Amy is tall and slim. She looks lovely and doesn't wear glasses.

Amy is good at drawing, and she likes dancing. She is good at all the subjects. She has many good friends at school. They are all nice to her.

【解析】

写作思路：本文是一篇介绍朋友的文章。首先要开篇点题，指出谁是我最好的朋友，然后根据写作内容提示，对我的好朋友进行描述，最后对文章进行总结，做到收尾呼应。本篇作文分别介绍了Amy的年龄，长相，爱好，擅长的科目等，条理清晰，内容全面，符合题目要求。整篇文章使用一般现在时，时态运用正确。并且be good at, come from, be nice to sb，like doing sth等短语的使用恰到好处，是一篇不错的文章。