Question

3．以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿．
注意：
所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
词数：100个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；
文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分．
Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．
From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般过去时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

解答 Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．
    From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．