Question

【题目】善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为

主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待

他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

提示词语： important, help, happy

提示问题： ● What do you think of being kind to others?

● What did you do?

● How do you feel?

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue (美德) of Chinese people. ______

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Answer 1

【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very

important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the

English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I

encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,

when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.

Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,

he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.

【解析】

试题

本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。

写作亮点：

短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。