Question

6．你将来可能会有很多钱，请你以 If I have a lot of money，I will…为题，写一篇短文，表述自己拥有财富后将如何帮助他人．
If I have a lot of money，I will…If I have a lot of money，I will do many things．
I will help the people who are poor．If they have money，they will have nice life．They can buy many things for them．Their sons or daughters can go to school．So they will be happy．So do I．
I will help orphans．I think orphans are very poor．They have lost their fathers and mothers．So they are alone．If I have a lot of money，I will set up an orphanage．So the orphans can live in it happily．
Of course，I will buy something for me．I will buy some books to read．So I can learn a lot of knowlege．Books can open my eyes and make me be a useful person．
If I have a lot of money，I think I will be very happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：I will help the people who are poor我会帮助那些贫穷的人．这是一个由who引导的定语从句，先行词是people（人们），在定语从句中充当主语，who是一个关系词，指代先行词people，同时，先行词是指人，who可以替换为that．
高分句型二：So they will be happy．So do I．所以他们会很高兴．我也是．该结构主要用来说明前面所说的情况也同样适用于后面的人或物，意为"…也一样"．该结构中的助动词 do 根据前文的情况也可换成 is，am，are，was，were，does，did，can，could 等．

解答 If I have a lot of money，I will do many things．
I will help the people who are poor．（高分句型一：这是一个由who引导的定语从句，先行词是people（人们），在定语从句中充当主语，who是一个关系词，指代先行词people，同时，先行词是指人，who可以替换为that．）
 If they have money，they will have nice life．They can buy many things for them．Their sons or daughters can go to school．So they will be happy．So do I．（高分句型二：我也是．该结构主要用来说明前面所说的情况也同样适用于后面的人或物，意为"…也一样"．该结构中的助动词 do 根据前文的情况也可换成 is，am，are，was，were，does，did，can，could 等．）
I will help orphans．I think orphans are very poor．They have lost their fathers and mothers．So they are alone．If I have a lot of money，I will set up an orphanage．So the orphans can live in it happily．
Of course，I will buy something for me．I will buy some books to read．So I can learn a lot of knowlege．Books can open my eyes and make me be a useful person．
If I have a lot of money，I think I will be very happy．

点评 本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等．