Question

10．假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望你知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：
1．他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等；
2．感谢的理由．
要求：1．短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺、意思连贯；
3．字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内；
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．
She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给出简要写作要点的提纲类作文．内容为假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望你知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件．时态为一般现在时．人称为第三人称单数．写作要点包括：1．最需感谢的人；2．他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等；3．感谢的理由．常用到的重点句型和短语：try to do，make sb．do sth．，take sb．to…，定语从句，宾语从句等．

解答 Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale

点评 这是一篇限制了作文范畴并给出了简要写作提纲的作文．考生在作文时可先列好提纲，主要从两方面展开自己的作文．再根据提示，将提纲进一步完善，并进行必要的发挥，使行文流畅，感情真挚．适当使用定语从句、宾语从句来完善句子，使文章更出彩．