Question

提示：在每个人的成长过程中，有些因素对人的成长具有重要的作用。如，一桩事、一件物、一个人、一段经历、一次体验……。请你就其中的一个进行描述，与大家分享。

要求：内容切题、语句通顺、意思连贯、字迹清楚。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

 

Answer 1

I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, all is because of my mother’s diaries.

One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She a because of lso expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries.

Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I also try to understand my mother’s feelings.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。本文从成长过程中意外看到母亲的日记知道母亲对自己的爱和失望，从此作者想改变自己。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文记述了作者成长中的一次经历和怎样使自己改变。本文用到了一些固定的词组because of由于……的原因，began to do开始去做某事，I have changed a lot.这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。