Question

【题目】书面表达。

下面是关于你的新朋友Jack的人物描述，请用 大约70个英文单词把你的朋友介绍给大家。

要求：句子连贯通顺，可适当发挥。

1、 Jack是一名7年级3班的学生，他今年13岁了，就读于阳光中学。

2、他戴眼镜，短发，个子高，很强壮。

3、他非常喜欢踢足球，放学后他经常和同学们一起踢球，他球踢得非常好，他是校足球 队的一员。

4、迈克喜欢语文和英语，他擅长英语。他喜欢听音乐，跑步。周末，他喜欢看足球比赛。他喜欢谈论他的偶像，贝克汉姆（Beckham）。

5、他希望他可以成为一名足球运动员，我希望他的梦想可以成真。

My new friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My New Friend

I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 13 years old. He is a student of Class3, Grade7. He studies at Sunshine Middle School. He wears glasses and he looks tall and strong. He has short hair. He likes playing football very much. He often plays it with his classmates after school. He plays football very well and he is a member of the school football team. He likes Chinese and English. He is good at English. He enjoys listening to music and running. On weekends, he lovees watching football games. He likes to talk about his hero, Beckham. He wants to be a football player one day. I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的新朋友Jack。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：His name is...，He is...，He likes...，He wants...，I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意主谓一致。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的新朋友的名字，接下来介绍他的长相和喜好，最后介绍他的梦想。此处like doing sth, play football, a member of, be good at, enjoy doing sth, listen to music, on weekends, talk about, want to do sth,come true等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。