Question

17．你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游．请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数80左右．

要求：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名．
     Hi，John，I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation．I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit．
     Fujian lies                                           
     I'm looking forward to meeting you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．
句中使用短语有："because of  因为"、"be known as  作为…而著名"．这句话意为：因为优美的环境，它以"清新福建"而著名．
高分句型二：
If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．
句中"If you come"为条件状语从句，"as well as  除了…也"．这句话意为：如果你来，你可以呼吸清新的空气、欣赏蓝色的天空，还有美丽的大山、清澈的河流．

解答 Hi，John，I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation．I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit．（开篇点题）
     Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city．It has a population of over 38 million．Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．【高分句型一】It attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．【高分句型二】Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting．Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food．（介绍福建）
     I'm looking forward to meeting you!（提出邀请）

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