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3．当前，学生的学校生活多姿多彩，业余爱好也丰富多样．下图是我们对某所中学300名学生业余爱好的调查结果．请根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文．

要求：（1）必须包括：①调查结果②你自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处．
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名或人名．
（3）词数80～100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300students usually do in their free time．Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time．Nearly half of the students like music，and a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends，twenty percent enjoy reading books．A few students like collecting things they like，such as stamps，coins and so on．Few students have other hobbies．
As for me，I prefer listening to music．Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study．Sometimes I listen to English songs．I can learn English words or phrases from them．It really improves my English a lot．．

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分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容为根据图表中对某所中学300名学生业余爱好的调查结果写一篇文章．内容用一般现在时．人称用第三人称复数形式和第一人称．写作要点包括：1．根据图表描述调查的结果；2．自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处．常用到的重点短语和句型：half of…，a quarter of…，a few，few，sb．spend sometime doing sth．，prefer doing sth．

解答 Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time．Nearly half of the students like music，and a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends，twenty percent enjoy reading books．A few students like collecting things they like，such as stamps，coins and so on．Few students have other hobbies．
As for me，I prefer listening to music．Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study．Sometimes I listen to English songs．I can learn English words or phrases from them．It really improves my English a lot．

点评 这是图表类作文中的饼状图作文．该类作文首先要突出重点，抓住图表中的极端点，如：最大或最小；图表往往提供大量数据，考生应该仔细观察分析，从中选择有效信息，图表上资料、数据的描述必须选择重点；说明、描述图表时应该注意动词时态，属于过去发生的应该用一般过去时，属于经常发生的应该用一般现在时；应该熟练掌握一些固定句型和表达方式，并要将这些表达练熟，不要出错．