Question

1．下面是某一英文报上刊登的一封读者来信，请你给这位中学生写封回信．
Dear editor，
I have a big problem now．You see，I am a little shy．Sometimes I really don't know whom I should ask for help when I am in trouble．I am always afraid that I will disturb（打扰）them What should I do？Can you give me some advice？
Yours，
Lucy
要求：
1．回信的内容要包括以下要点：
（1）首先要学会与人交流，多交朋友；
（2）可以求助于同学和朋友，因为年龄相仿，容易相互理解；
（3）可以求助于老师和家长，因为他们愿意帮你，也懂得更多．
2．为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容．
3．词数90左右．信的开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Lucy，
What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice．                               
Yours，
Peter．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible．
句中使用短语有："communicate with sb 跟某人沟通"、"make friends 交朋友"、"as…as possible  尽可能…"．这句话意为：首先，你应该学习怎么跟别人交流，尽可能多的交朋友．
高分句型二：
Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for  help．
句中使用短语有："tell sb about sth 告诉某人关于某事"、"ask sb for help 向某人寻求帮助"．这句话意为：另外，你可以告诉老师或父母你的问题，并向他们寻求帮助．

解答 Dear Lucy，
     What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice．（开篇点题）
     First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible．【高分句型一】Then when you are in trouble，you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they are the same age as you．I think you can understand each other easily．Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for  help．【高分句型二】You see，they are always ready to help you．What's more，they know more about the problems．（提出建议）
     I hope you think my advice is worth taking and can get better soon．（表达祝福）
Yours，
Peter

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．