Question

5．规划人生，成就未来．请写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作．
提示：1．我外向，常常讲故事逗同学笑．
2．想成为一名演员，因为喜欢看各种电影．
3．打算学唱歌、跳舞，努力学英语．
4、高中毕业后想去上大学，学表演课．
5、找一份理想的工作并环游世界．
要求：1、包含提示内容，语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥；2、不少于60词，文中不得出现真实的人名等相关信息．
My dream job
I am an outgoing boy，I often tell jokes to make students laugh，I want to be an actor because I like seeing all kind s of movies．I'm going to learn to sing，dance and work hard at English．I want to go to college after graduating from high school，Iwill have acting classes，too．I think I can find an ideal job and travel around the world．I hope my dream will come true one day．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一  
I want to be an actor  because I like seeing all kind s of movies．我想成为一名演员，因为我喜欢看各种各样的电影．这是 because 引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
高分句型二
I hope my dream will come true one day．我希望有一天我的梦想会实现．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 My dream job
I am an outgoing boy，I often tell jokes to make students laugh【要点一，我外向，常常讲故事逗同学笑．】，I want to be an actor  because I like seeing all kind s of movies【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．【要点二，想成为一名演员，因为喜欢看各种电影】I'm going to learn to sing，dance and work hard at English【要点三，打算学唱歌、跳舞，努力学英语】．I want to go to college after graduating from high school，I will have  acting classes，too．【要点四，高中毕业后想去上大学，学表演课．】I think I can find an ideal job and travel around the world．I hope my dream will come true one day【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点五，找一份理想的工作并环游世界．】

点评 动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．