Question

【题目】假设你Simon,是江南晚报的记者，想要写一篇关于介绍无锡的简讯，希望让更多的人了解你家乡无锡的情况。内容提示如下：

1. 无锡位于中国东部，由六个不同的区(district)组成；

2. 无锡有许多自然景观，因太湖(Tai Lake)而出名，过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物；

3. 最近政府已经采取措施改善形势，把一些工厂变成了公园；

4. 每天我们都能看到许多人来参观；每年来无锡的最好的时间是四月和五月；

5. 我希望……

注意：

1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，词数80个左右，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 第5要点内容共须用1～2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

Answer 1

【答案】

Wuxi lies/ is in the east of/ eastern part of China. It is made up of six districts. There are lots of places of natural beauty in it./ it has lots of places of natural beauty. It is famous forTai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake./ In the past, many factories put its waste into the lake. Recently the government has taken action to improve the situation. It has turned some factories into the parks. Every day we can see lots of people come to visit Wuxi. The best time to come to Wuxi is in April and May. (I hope you can come and visit soon. I’ll show you around it. I’m sure you’ll have great fun.)

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。题目所给要点比较详细。我们要用准确的语句把每一个要点都表达出来。要做到语句通顺，意思连贯。也可以适当发挥，但一定要围绕主题。本文主要以第三人称书写。介绍过去受污染用一般过去时，介绍政府已采取措施用现在完成时。

写作亮点：短文中There are lots of places of natural beauty in it./ it has lots of places of natural beauty. It is famous forTai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake.这几个句子比较好。