Question

6．德州正在创建文明城市（build a civilized city），假设你所在的学校要开展以"做文明市民，从我做起"为主题的宣传月活动．请你写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈如何做．以下内容供参考：
1．衣着整洁，不说脏话；2．礼貌待人，热心助人；3．遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4．…
注意：1．文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；
2．内容可适当扩展．
3.80词左右．
In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities．
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．We should never say dirtywords．It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．We should also obey traffic rules．When thetraffic lights are red，we should stop．Don't throwlitter or spit about． And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈如何做文明市民．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．衣着整洁，不说脏话；2．礼貌待人，热心助人；3．遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4．其他
常用到的重点短语：
in order to 为了…
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
be friendly to sb 对某人友好
obey the rules 遵守规则
had better do sth最好做某事
【高分句型】
1．①In order to build a civilized city，we students should②try our best to behave well in the activities．
①in order to 为了…，做目的状语．
②try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事

2．①Be friendly to others and always ②ready to help the people ③in need．
①be friendly to sb 对某人友好
②be ready to do sth乐于做某事
③in need在危急中，介词短语做后置定语，修饰前面的people．

解答 In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities．【高分句型】
      It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．We should never say dirty words．（衣着整洁，不说脏话）It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．【高分句型】For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．（礼貌待人，热心助人）We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．Don't throw litter or spit about．（遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾） And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．（其他：公共场所不大声说笑）
     If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．