Question

书面表达 （15 分）

为自己设计一个旅行计划，要包括下列问题：

1. 想去哪？为什么？

2. 想在那儿待几天？

3. 怎么去？为什么？

4. 打算什么时候开始旅行？独自一人还是与别人同去？

5. 在这次旅行期间，打算做些什么？

要求：意思连贯、通顺，词数在 60~80 之间。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A plan for a trip

1. I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good.The air there is fresh, and I can enjoy a quiet life. The food and vegetables are good, too.

2. I'm going to stay for a week.

3. I'll go by bike. In this way, I can take exercise as well.

4. I'll go tomorrow morning.

5. When I go, I'll take some school things, like books, pens, pencils and so on.

I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study.

6. I think I'll be very tired but I'll enjoy myself.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让我们自己制订旅游计划的小短文。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good. I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study. 有一些好的固定短语还有连词。

考点：提纲类作文。