Question

假设联合国教科文组织正在举行“保护地球”英文征文活动，请以“Save the Earth！”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容要点包括：

现状	1. 地球变脏、变暖； 2. 自然灾害多发；
原因	1. 人口增长； 2. 砍伐森林、滥杀动物；
建议	1. 保护地球，从我做起； 2. 不吃野生动物； 3. 其他建议，请至少列出一个。

注意:

1. 词数70左右。短文须包括所有内容要点，要点表达不分先后，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文中不要出现具体的学校名和人名。

Save the Earth！

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, __________________________________

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I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, it’s getting dirtier and warmer now. Natural disasters happen more often than before.

Why does this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people cut down forests and kill too many animals.

What can we do then? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We can also use both sides of the paper and plant more trees.

I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

(73 words)

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给定材料作文，文章内容十分明确。并且给出了相关信息。在写作时，主要文章的结构要清晰，不要漏掉信息点。可以以第一人称写，写作时要注意句子的完整性，做到主谓一致。可以适当使用一些连词，使文章更紧凑，逻辑更清晰。

【亮点说明】文章结构清晰明了，句子表达准确。

考点：提纲作文。