Question

假如你是李丹，请根据所给提示，用英文写一篇推荐信，推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生。词数：80左右。信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数、

1.王艳，16岁；一个聪明的女孩,脸上总是挂着微笑。

2.学东西快，擅长数学。

3.篮球打得很好，是校篮球队的成员。

4.非常乐于助人。经常在车上给老人让座。他是足够勇敢从火里救出一个男孩。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

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We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl. She always wears a smile on her face. She is very clever and studies very hard. She is good at maths and she learns everything quickly. She plays basketball very well and she is in our school basketball team. After school, she often plays basketball with her classmates. She is always ready to help others. She often gives her seat to the old people on the bus. Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire.

We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以李丹的身份写一封推荐信，推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生。信的开头和结尾都已经写好了，我们需要将主要内容，即王艳的一些情况表述清楚。题目中给我们列出了一个提纲，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。这些内容包括王艳的年龄、学习情况、爱好和她的性格特点。这些内容应该用第三人称，一般现在时态表达，所以要特别注意每句话中谓语动词应该用三单的形式。其中在最后一点中王艳救了一个男孩，这一点我们需要用过去时态来表达，也要注意动词的正确形式。写作时，要注意多使用好的句型和短语以及一些连词，使整篇短文表达流畅，意思连贯。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目要求介绍了王艳的情况，推荐她当选校优秀学生。首先作者介绍了王艳的基本情况，Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl. She always wears a smile on her face，这里使用了一个短语16-year-old girl，比较亮眼；接下来写的是王艳的学习情况，She is very clever and studies very hard. She is good at maths and she learns everything quickly.，这几句话使用的是一般现在时态，所以谓语动词用第三人称单数形式；然后作者写的是王艳的爱好，这里主要使用的是并列句。最后着重谢了王艳乐于助人，She is always ready to help others.、Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire。这里用了比较好的句型be ready to do sth. 和be +形容词enough to do sth.，很好的将意思表达了出来。整篇短文意思连贯，表达准确到位。

考点：提纲类作文。