Question

10．请以"My life in ten years为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文．提示 （短文须包含下列要点）：
1．What do you want to be in ten years？And why？
2．where will you live in ten years？And why？
3．Say something about your family or your free time activities in ten years．
4．What should you do to achieve your dreams？
注意：短文中，不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
My life in ten years．
In ten years，I think I'll be a reporter．I will live in an apartment with my sister．Because I don't like living alone．And I can play with her in my apartment．So in ten years，I will be a good reporter．I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another places on business．In ten years，I will have many different pets．Maybe I will keep a pet turtle．I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time．And I will go to Londonon my vacation．So，my life in ten years will be better and better!．

Answer 1

分析 因为是设想十年之后的生活，因此应该用一般将来时，其中要点要包括：1．十年之后你想做什么？为什么？2．你将会在哪里定居？为什么？3．描述一下那时你的生活．4．为了理想你该怎么做．在写作过程中要注意时态的运用，还要层次分明，尽量用简单句．

解答 My life in ten years
    In ten years，I think I'll be a reporter．I will live in an apartment with my sister．Because I don't like living alone．And I can play with her in my apartment．So in ten years，I will be a good reporter．I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another places on business．In ten years，I will have many different pets．Maybe I will keep a pet turtle．I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time．And I will go to London on my vacation．
So，my life in ten years will be better and better!

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．