Question

假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Jim想了解一下中国家庭的家规(family rules)，请你根据你家的情况给他写一封回信，给Jim介绍一下你家的家规和你对家规的看法。要求：语言合理、语句通顺；60词左右；信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.

My parents are very strict because I have so many family rules.

For example,I can't go out with my friends on school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I think it's necessary.

And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself.

I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I have to be in bed by ten o'clock.

Thanks to these rules.I can keep healthy.But I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock! Students need nine hours sleep!

And I think playing some computer games is not good for us children. So I think the family rules can make some changes.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封回信，要符合信的格式，因为这是给Jim一封回信介绍一下自己家的家规和自己对家规的看法，所以注意使用正确的主语。要注意主谓一致及动词的时态。最后要写出对家规的看法。

【亮点说明】本文使用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如: I can't go out with my friends on school nights. And I must finish my homework in time. I think it is unfair to be in bed by ten o'clock等，短文也使用了一些连词如：but，because和and等。使句子结构复杂化了。

考点：提纲作文。