Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友Mike通过邮件谈论成长过程中对自己产生过重要影响的人，他想了解你生命中最重要的人是谁，请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语： helpful, patient, look after, brave, love

To Mike From Li Ping Subject The most important person in my life Hi! Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________ ________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping

 

Answer 1

Hi! Mike,

As for me, the most important person in my life is my mother.

She is caring and helpful. Once I hurt my leg badly and had to stay in bed for three weeks. My mother not only looked after me all the time but also helped me with my lessons. With her help, I recovered very soon.

I have learned a lot from my mother. I decide to be a person like her, who is patient and helpful to others. I’ve also learned to be brave to face any difficulties. I love my mum.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇英语提纲的给材料作文。要求介绍你成长中最重要的人，并说明为什么重要及你从他身上学到了什么。

【亮点说明】这篇短文要点描述清晰条理没有语言错误。多种句型结构和丰富的词汇如As for me, not only but also，With her help ，I decide to be a person like her, who is patient and helpful to others。使文章更有逻辑，更丰富。

考点：提纲作文。