Question

书面表达（10分）

根据下面表格提示，写一篇短文介绍一下你的朋友Mary的假期。（要求：语法正确，语句通顺，可适当发挥。词数50左右。）

Name	Place	Time	Weather	Food	Activities
Mary	London	last year	cool, cloudy	hamburger, fried fish，pizza, chicken	visit a friend, go shopping, go to the movies

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Answer 1

Last year Mary went to London for vacation. It was her first time to visit London, which was the dream city for her. The weather there was cool and cloudy, she was very happy. There were many interesting things she could do in London. First, There were a lot of delicious food waiting for her to enjoy, such as hamburger fried fish，pizza .and chicken . Second, she could visit a friend, go shopping and go to the movies. She had a wonderful vacation!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表作文。要求我们以Mary’s vacation为题写一篇作文。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知人物Mary,地点London时间last year, 可知本文主要是一般过去时，主语是第三人称在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括两部分的内容。一是伦敦的美食；二是组织的活动，如购物，拜访朋友等。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了，为文章增色不少.如: There were many interesting things she could do in London 伦敦有许多有趣的好玩的；There were a lot of delicious food waiting for her to enjoy那里有许多美食等她来享用。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：图表作文.