Question

书面表达(15分) 凉爽的秋日适合旅行，本周末你打算和同学们将进行一次野外徒步旅行，现在请你以Mr Dong的名义拟一份通知（开头已给出）。词数 70个左右。文中不得出现真实的姓名和班级，通知应包括以下内容(次序不限)：

1. Where are you going? 2. When are you leaving?

3. Where are you leaving from? 4. What should the students take with them?

5. What are you doing there? 6.How long are you staying there?.....

参考词汇：this weekend Mountain Huang ( Mountain Yangdang …) go hiking

leave leave for...（前往……） raincoat（雨衣） backpack stay there for...

visit take photos take … with … 把……带在某人身边 …

Boys and girls,

Tomorrow is Saturday.___________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Boys and girls,

Tomorrow is Saturday we are going hiking this weeken, we will meet at the school gate at six o’clock tomorrow morning.Please wear comfortable shoes because we will cilmb Mountain Huang .We will stay there for.one day. We will visit many interest of places.and We can take some photos .please take some food and drink with you.Don’'t be late.

Mr.dong

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态时态，主语是第一人称，写到了一些通知的注意事项。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: we will meet at the school gate at six o’clock tomorrow morning，We will visit many interest of places学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。