Question

听说过孝心少年的故事吗？茶园姐弟林章羽、何秀巡，湖北恩施人，在母亲因病去世、父亲外出打工的情况下，常年坚持代父母行孝，照顾着年事已高的外婆，用稚嫩的肩膀支撑起一个风雨飘摇的家。姐弟相依为命，手足亲情，在磨难面前依然快乐面对。作为一名初三的学生，应该怎么面对中考的压力和学习中的困难呢？请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：1．简要描述茶园姐弟林章羽、何秀巡的经历。
2．谈谈从他们的经历中得到的启示。
3．在迎接中考的过程中，会紧张，会遇到不会做的题目，我们该怎样面对呢？
写作要求：1．条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。
2．不能照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3．词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version:
Life is like a mirror, when you smile to it, it will smile back. This year I am moved by a group young children. Here, I’d like to tell you a story about Lin Zhangyu and He Xiuxun who were born in Enshi, Hubei Province. The two children whose mother has died takes good care of their old grandmother while their father worked outside. When I heard about their story, I couldn’t help crying because they were so young and so kind.
I am Li Lei. I am as old as the brother and the sister. I’ll take a big test in the third year. I feel stressed out because I have trouble with my lessons. I want to learn from the two brave children. I’ll regard problems as challenges. I’ll talk with my teacher about my problems and ask for help. I also want to face the challenges bravely. At the same time, I’ll learn to take care of my parents and myself.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍作为一名初三的学生，应该怎么面对中考的压力和学习中的困难。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I am as old as the brother and the sister. I’ll regard problems as challenges. I want to learn from the two brave children. I also want to face the challenges bravely等，At the same time等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。