Question

5．5月10日是母亲节，在母亲节来临之际，请根据下列要点给你母亲写封信，和她谈谈心里话．
要点：1．母亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上好的生活．
2．母亲对我学习严格要求，但在我考试失利时，又经常鼓励我不要放弃．
3．表达对母亲的感谢和祝福．
提示词：admire（崇拜），express（表达），lead（过上），receive （收到），be strict with（要求严格），encouragement（鼓励）
要求：1．短文内容应包括所含提示要点，不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥，
语言流畅．
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校；
3．字数：80字左右（不含已给出的句子的词数）．
Dear mother，
Mother's Day is coming．I want to say thank you on this special day．You are the woman that I admire most in this world but I don't know how to express my thanks most of the time
I want to thank you for working so hard．Because of your great effort，our family lead a happy life and I receive better education．I understand that you are strict with me in my study because you want me to be better than before．I appreciate your kind encouragement when I failed in my exams．
I wish you could always be healthy and happy．I will try my best to be a man that you have always wished．

Yours，
Zhang Jun．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容给在母亲节来临之际给你母亲写封信，和她谈谈心里话．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．母亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上好的生活．
2．母亲对我学习严格要求，但在我考试失利时，又经常鼓励我不要放弃．
3．表达对母亲的感谢和祝福
常用到的重点短语：
because of 因为…
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
thank sb for…因为…而感谢…
be strict with sb in sth在某事上对某人严格要求

【高分句型】
1．You are the woman①that I admire most in this world②but I don't know ③how to express my thanks most of the time．
①that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词the woman．
②but表转折，但是
③特殊疑问词+to do 结构作为know的宾语．

2．I will ①try my best to be a man ②that you have always wished
①try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
②that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词a man．

解答 Ⅹ．Possible version：
Dear mother，
Mother's Day is coming．I want to say thank you on this special day．You are the woman that I admire most in this world but I don't know how to express my thanks most of the time【高分句型】．（表达感激之情）
I want to thank you for working so hard．Because of your great effort，our family lead a happy life and I receive better education．（母亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育）I understand that you are strict with me in my study because you want me to be better than before．I appreciate your kind encouragement when I failed in my exams．（母亲对我学习严格要求，又经常鼓励我不要放弃）
I wish you could always be healthy and happy．I will try my best to be a man that you have always wished．【高分句型】（表达对母亲的感谢和祝福）
Yours，
Zhang Jun

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯