Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面表格内容，以The changes to my hometown 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你家乡的变化。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

过去	河水很干净，空气很新鲜，到处都有绿树和漂亮的花儿；但人们住在低矮的房子里；人们只能用自行车去镇上，大多数人步行上学或上班。
现在	街道既干净又宽阔；公交车和出租车很多，许多人有自己的车，一个新的火车站自2005年以来就投入使用了，所以人们外出非常方便；大部分人都搬进了新的公寓，过着现代化的生活。但是树更少了，环境也没有以前好了。
将来	希望我的家乡在将来……

The changes to my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The changes to my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.

In the past, the water was clear and the air was fresh. There were green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. It was a wonderful place to live. However, people lived in small and old houses. People could only use bicycles to the town. Most people had to go to school or work on foot.

Things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide. Many buses and taxis pass there. A lot of people have their own cars. A new railway station has been in service since 2005 so it is easy for people to go out. Most people have moved into new flats. They are living a modern life. The changes have brought many advantages and they have also caused many problems for people. There are fewer trees and the environment is not as good as before.

I hope my home town will be more and more beautiful in the future and people will live a better life.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为我家乡的改变，具体内容包括故去和现在人们在交通方式，环境，生活条件等方面的变化，以及个人对于家乡未来的期望，在写作时应注意符合题意，同时应注意使用多种不同时态的结构，同时应注意写作时语言的准确性和连贯性。

写作亮点： 这篇短文要点叙述全，几乎没有语言错误，句式变化灵活。语言丰富。同时使用一些固定句式和短语，如： Great changes have taken place, in the past,as ...as等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。