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15．三年的初中生活让你收获满满．校英语报邀你写一管短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或
他们的父母提一些建议．请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点．

Advice for students	Advice for parents
keep healthy join clubs develop your study skills …	encourage．…more not compare…with allow…to make decisions …

注意：（1）短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数．
短文首句；How time flies!NowHowtimeflies!Now I'm graduating from our school．At the moment，I would like to share my experience of school life with you．【高分句型一】Here is some advice for studentsofGrade 9．（引出话题）
It is not enough to just study hard．【高分句型二】There are many good ways to improve our study．Different subjects need different ways．But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class，and review them after class．Another thing is asking questions during or after class．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes．（学习技巧）
You should alsoexercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you．（保持身体健康）
Everyone has hobbies．But sometimes these can get in the way of our schoolwork．So I think study must co me first．But youcan join some useful clubs，such as English club、basketball club、chess club and so on．（兴趣与爱好）
I hope it can be helpful to you．Wish you success!（祝愿）（you your children）are students of Grade9．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I would like to share my experience of school life with you．我想和你分享我的学校生活经历．
would like to do sth表示想做某事．
【高分句型二】
It is not enough to just study hard．仅仅努力学习是不够的．
It is not enough to do sth做某事是不够的，it作形式主语，真正的主语是to引导的不定式短语．

解答 How time flies!Now I'm graduating from our school．At the moment，I would like to share my experience of school life with you．【高分句型一】Here is some advice for students of Grade 9．（引出话题）
It is not enough to just study hard．【高分句型二】There are many good ways to improve our study．Different subjects need different ways．But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class，and review them after class．Another thing is asking questions during or after class．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes．（学习技巧）
You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you．（保持身体健康）
Everyone has hobbies．But sometimes these can get in the way of our schoolwork．So I think study must co me first．But you can join some useful clubs，such as English club、basketball club、chess club and so on．（兴趣与爱好）
I hope it can be helpful to you．Wish you success!（祝愿）

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇