Question

七岁的女孩Mary来自美国,在日常生活中，她喜欢听音乐，喜欢去动物园。她家里有一台电脑，她通常在周六玩电脑游戏。她的妈妈每天都会在网上搜索信息,，有时还进行网上购物。她的爸爸喜欢在网上看足球比赛，还经常在电脑上玩游戏。请根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍她及其家人。
要求：
1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。
2. 至少60词。

Answer 1

Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.

解析试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中用了一些常见短语：be from来自某处；  like doing喜欢做某事；  listen to 听；search for 寻找；go shopping购物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo这个句子中and连接两个并列的动词，形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it这个句子中and连接两个句子，时态保持一致。
考点： 提纲类作文。