Question

【题目】书面表达（满分20分）

很多学校在临近考试期间，往往将体育课改上一些“主课”课程。对此学生和老师都有自己的观点，请根据表格提示，谈谈你自己的看法。词数在80-100之间。

Teachers’ ideas	Your ideas
1. PE classes are less important	…
2. score means everything
3. knowledge is endless

注意： 1.内容必须包括你自己的意见至少3点，适当展开。

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。

3.文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

In many schools, the PE class is replaced by Chinese, math, or English before the exam.

_________________________________________________________what do you think of it?

Answer 1

【答案】

In many schools, the PE class is replaced by Chinese, math, scientist or English before the final exam. As for this, students and teachers all have different ideas. So we had a discussion about whether PE classes should be replaced by other classes. The opinions are as follows. Our teachers think PE classes are less important than Chinese, math and other classes. In their opinions, score means every thing and knowledge is endless.

However, I disagrees with them. Personally, I hold the opinion that we students have the right to have a rest. Besides, having PE classes can help us study better. More importantly, having PE classes can keep us in good health. As you know, health is everything. if you’re not healthy, you can’t get good grades anymore. In a word, I think we should have PE classes before the final exam. What do you think of it?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：have a discussion about sth、in one’s opinions、have the right to do sth、keep in good health、As you know, health is everything、in a word以及过渡词so、however等的使用，为文章增色不少。