Question

9．为落实临沂市加强英语听说教学的要求，你校开办了English Club，俱乐部正在招募会员，假如你是李林，写一封信，申请加入俱乐部．
要求：
1．信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥．
2．信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．
3．词数，不少于60词，开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

English Club Are you good at English listening and speaking？ Now your chance! Activities：Watch English movies； Learn English songs； Hold English talent shows Time：Every Tuesday，Thursday 6：30---8：00pm Come on and join us! Please write to Miss Gao!

提示：
1．Why do you want to join the English Club？
2．Which activity do you like best in the club？
3．What else do you want to do in the club？
Dear Miss Gao，
I'm Li Lin，I'm glad to see the poster in our school．I want to join the English club because Ilike English very much．But I'm not good at listening and speaking．I hope tohave more chances to improve them．
There aremany helpful activities in the club，but watching English movies is myfavorite．It can not only make me relaxed，but also improve my listeningskills．
Although thereare many activities here，I still want more．Can you provide us with someEnglish books？Can you give me an opportunity to talk to foreigners？
I'm looking forward to your answer soon．
Yours，
Li Lin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：But I'm not good at listening and speaking．但我不擅长听和说．
be good at doing sth"擅长做某事"
高分句型二：Although thereare many activities here，I still want more．虽然有很多的活动，但在这里，我还想要更多．
although引导的让步状语从句，"尽管，虽然"．

解答 Dear Miss Gao，
   I'm Li Lin．I'mglad to see the poster in our school．I want to join the English club because Ilike English very much．But I'm not good at listening and speaking．【高分句型一】I hope to have more chances to improve them．（加入俱乐部的原因）
   There are many helpful activities in the club，but watching English movies is myfavorite．It can not only make me relaxed，but also improve my listening skills．（在俱乐部最喜欢的活动）
  Although there are many activities here，I still want more．【高分句型二】Can you provide us with someEnglish books？Can you give me an opportunity to talk to foreigners？（在俱乐部还想做什么）
  I'm lookingforward to your answer soon．
                               Yours，
                               Li Lin

点评 本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真读题，把握写作要求和写作目的．写作前最好先根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用．最后穿连起来．作文中须包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确．并恰当地运用短语和句式，注意句子开头的变化的衔接．