Question

书面表达。将答案写在答题卡的相应位置上。（共10分）

近年来由于极端天气，我国西南地区放生了特大的旱情，雾霾天气时有发生，所以我们应该认识到节水 节能 控制污染的重要性。以Let’s do something to save our environment为题写一篇文章。

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Answer 1

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes have died. The bottoms of the rivers and the lakes have become grass land. So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the room with the used water. Second, we should save energy. For example, we must remember to turn off the lights when we leave. We'd better walk or ride instead of driving. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories. Let's act now to save our environment.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以Let’s do something to save our environment为题写一篇文章。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容，主要包括：节水 节能 控制污染。主要内容虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求, 说明了为了保护环境我们要怎样节水、 节能、 控制污染。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Let's act now to save our environment.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如So everyone should do something to save our environment. For example, we must remember to turn off the lights when we leave. We'd better walk or ride instead of driving.等。

考点：话题类作文。