Question

湖南卫视真人秀《爸爸去哪儿》收视火爆，节目讲述了五对笨手笨脚的爸爸带着孩子去陌生的地方完成一些有趣但是艰难的任务。为了完成任务，孩子们学会了团队精神和如何与人相处。你所在的小组对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，请根据以下你所在的小组的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。

Suggestions	learn to share respect(尊重) others communicate with each other …
My suggestion	…

注意：（1）词数80-100 （2）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校
How to Get on Well with Others
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

How to Get on Well with Others
As we know students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well.

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所给的题目和一档电视节目并结合表格中的内容完成这篇文章，表达出自己的观点。我们要用恰当的语言准确地描述作文内容。写作中要重点描述如何与人相处这一核心内容，表达出习作者对这一问题的观点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了自己对如何与人相处这一问题的看法，并包含了题干中所要求的基本信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含倒装句的准确使用为文章增色不少.如Only in these ways can we get along well.，还有恰当的过度与衔接语，如First of all,，Besides，What’s more,，In my opinion,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。