假如你是Lily,是一名九年级学生,每天都在为考试而学。请仔细阅读下面的图片,并根据要求给青少年问题专家Abby写一封求助信。
要求:1.结合图片写出自己面临的问题(至少从三个方面写);
2.希望得到帮助。
注意:1.词数:90左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数:
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Abby,
I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.____________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Lily
Dear Abby,
I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.
First, I have so much homework to do every day that I don’t have anytime for my hobbies. Second, I have to stay up late to finish all the exercises, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel sleepy in class the next day. Third. because of not having time for sport and sleep, I often feel tired and stressed. Also I fall ill easily. I don’t know if I can keep on with study. What should I do? I’d like you to give me some advice.
Yours,
Lily
【解析】
试题分析:这是一封看图作文。主要是写在九年级所遇到了困难。从图中我们可以看到一个女孩在做着一大堆的作业,由此可联系自己的实际感受写下面临的问题。同时,这是一封求助信,结尾可要求别人给你提供建议。所以,写作时要注意文章的完整性。注意句子的完整性和连贯性。
【亮点分析】
文章结构完整,表达清晰。在写问题的时候,用了first,second,third使文章结构更明了。另外,文章用了很多的短语和句式,如:so…that…如此…以至于…; stay up 熬夜;because of 因为;keep on with跟上等等;另外用了一些状语从句,例如so引导的结果状语从句,because 引导的原因状语从句等,使文章更紧凑和流畅。
考点:看图作文
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