Question

根据下面图片以第一人称写一篇短文，词数80左右。开头已给出(15分)

I took part in a friend's birthday party in the evening. It rained when I went home. On my way back home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

I took part in a friend's birthday party in the evening. It rained when I went home. On my way back home. I found a wallet. It rained heavily, but I want to find the owner,I think The person must be very anxious, so I'm waiting in the rain for a while,I saw a man come back ,He looked worried. I asked if it is his purse? He said to me it was his , and I handed the wallet to his hands, he was very grateful to me, I said no thanks, this is what I should do, Then I got home, I felt proud of myself. Each of us should help others

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文 。动笔前要认真观察图中的人物，事件，并适当发挥。根据图中内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: On my way back home.在我回家的路上I saw a man come back看见某人做某事see sb do sth, ,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：图画作文。