Question

【题目】书面表达

71. 随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

注意：1. 所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；

3. 词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词汇：

网购:shopping on line, 避免做某事:avoid doing sth,

商品:goods, 导致:cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如With the development of the Internet，be used to doing，on line，in our daily life，join the group，avoid doing，be interested in，Every coin has two sides，on one hand，on the Internet，on the other hand，all in all等。而With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line./ Shopping on line has many advantages. / On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.等多种非谓语动词结构和综合句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。