Question

书面表达

假如你是班长，学期结束时你要给同学作简短的评价。你班的李华这个学期变化很大，请你根据提示写一篇简评。

过去	功课不好，常与同学争吵，垃圾被他撒的满地都是，课桌总是一团糟。
现在	自从老师和他沟通后，有了很大变化。（学习、与同学相处、生活……）
结果	父母、老师对他很满意。
希望	在即将到来的考试中取得好成绩。

注意：

短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

括号部分须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Li Hua has improved a lot this term. In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam. (82 words)

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作对李华的过去的情况进行描写，不擅长于功课he didn’t do well in his subjects.与朋友吵架quarreled with his classmates. 垃圾被他撒的满地都是Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. 课桌总是一团糟His desk was always in a mess.然后对他现在的情况进行描写，如与同学能很好的相处gets along well with his classmates.等，再对现在的结果是父母、老师对他很满意His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.

考点：提纲式写作

点评：本文不难写，对于作文的写作要注意详略得当，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。