Question

假如你叫李华，是“邯郸好少年”的候选人之一，请你以“I Am Unique”为题，写一份演讲稿，介绍你在家里以及在学校的表现。

写作要求：

1. 词数60~80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

2. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名及相关信息；

3. 写作的要点要紧扣主题，可适当发挥。

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to

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Answer 1

One possible version:

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to say something about myself. I think I am a unique boy.

When I am at home, I listen to my parents, I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy.

When I am at school, I listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I usually help my classmates do a lot of things, like cleaning the floor, doing the homework, and so on.

In a word, I think I am a good and unique boy. I believe I can do better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求写一份演讲稿，介绍你在家里以及在学校的表现。写作的要点要紧扣主题，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文开门见山，第一段就点明主题“I think I am a unique boy.”文中还使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy. cleaning the floor, doing the homework, and so on. In a word, I believe I can do better in the future. 等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。