Question

目前有不少学生拥有自己的手机，青少年俱乐部关于这个问题做了一个调查，并收集了关于学生拥有手机的优点和不足，请根据调查的信息，谈谈自己的感受和看法。

	Do you agree students should have a mobile phone at school ?
46% of students agree.	54% of students don’t agree.
Mobile phone is very  useful.	They think it can bring some  problems.
make a call anywhere send text messages take photos keep friends’ phone numbers … …	make noise harm people’s physical health dangerous be bad for study … …
I think ……

要求：1.词数80个左右，开头已经给出不计入总数。

      2.内容必须包括上面的要点，自己适当加入个人的观点。

      3.条理清楚，语句连贯。

Now more and more students have mobile phones._______________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

   Now more and more students have mobile phones. The Youth Club make a survey on whether you agree students should have a mobile phone at school ?46% of students agree. They think it is useful. It is convenient for students to make a call at anywhere and send text messages to the relatives and friends. They also can use mobile phones to take photos of them. What’s more, the mobile phones can keep friends’ phone numbers and some important information.

   However, 54% of students don’t agree with it. They think it can bring some problems. Because students play games or send and receive mobile phone text messages at class, this will make a noise and affect the other teachers and students. The mobile phones harm people’s physical health. The most dangerous is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users’ brains. It may make the students lazy to download answers from the internet , so they may are bad for their study.

   In my opinion, students shouldn't take mobile phones to school, because it may make us play more and study less.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，对学生是否应该带手机进行了调查。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：They think......，the mobile phones can.......，及Because students...... 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的的观点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头说了同意学生带手机的理由，接下来介绍不同意学生带手机的原因，最后阐述自己的观点。此处用了 make a call，take photos of，make a noise，be harmful to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。