Question

11．假如你叫金莉莉，你上周和你的同学及英语老师一起去野餐．请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文来介绍一下这次野餐的情况．

A  picnic（野餐）
Time	Last Sunday
Place	Fragrant Hill （ 香山）
Food and drinks	Sandwiches，vegetables，fruit，some juice
Activities	Take photos，fly kites，tell jokes …

要求：
1．语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2.70词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数．
My name is Jin Lili．                                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes我们到达那里之后，我们照相，放风筝和讲笑话．
after引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
And we are all looking forward to our next picnic我们都期待下一次的旅行．
look forward to sth期待某事．

解答 My name is Jin Lili．I went to Fragrant Hill for a picnic with my classmates and our English teacher last Sunday（时间地点）．We took lots of food and drinks with us，such as sandwiches，vegetables，fruit and some juice．（食物饮料）After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes【高分句型一】．We also had a happy meal while enjoying the beautiful views of Fragrant Hill．（活动）It was really a great experience．We all had a good time that day．And we are all looking forward to our next picnic【高分句型二】．（感受）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．